海淀英语王Yoana
26-06-17 23:45 微博认证:教育博主

英语写作里常见的一种“炫技”方法:用复杂句代替简单句。

很多孩子整篇作文全是简单句:主谓宾、主谓宾、主谓宾。

阅卷老师看三句就知道水平。

普通版:I joined a club. I made many friends. I became more confident.

升级版:After joining the club, I made many friends and became more confident.

一句话,三个信息。

印象分立刻上来了。

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