英语写作里常见的一种“炫技”方法:用复杂句代替简单句。
很多孩子整篇作文全是简单句:主谓宾、主谓宾、主谓宾。
阅卷老师看三句就知道水平。
普通版:I joined a club. I made many friends. I became more confident.
升级版:After joining the club, I made many friends and became more confident.
一句话,三个信息。
印象分立刻上来了。
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英语写作里常见的一种“炫技”方法:用复杂句代替简单句。
很多孩子整篇作文全是简单句:主谓宾、主谓宾、主谓宾。
阅卷老师看三句就知道水平。
普通版:I joined a club. I made many friends. I became more confident.
升级版:After joining the club, I made many friends and became more confident.
一句话,三个信息。
印象分立刻上来了。