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26-06-11 09:57

第二题:BBB has certainly stepped up in English and she is now working effectively. She is settling to work quickly and seeking help when required. Her recent assessment piece for the XXXX section of the course was fluent and controlled and focused clearly on ideas suggested by the title. This should give BBB the confidence to continue her efforts. She does need to work on her text response essays as this is also an important part of the course. In her responses, she needs to focus clearly on the topic, write topic sentences on ideas and explain those ideas in detail. I look forward to BBB‘s continued application.

问:哪句话有问题,需要拆分?

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