📅 雅思备考攻略（六）｜大作文结尾段：一句话搞定，不添乱

📌 先说结论：
结尾段不是总结新观点，也不是升华主题。
一句话，换种说法重写开头段，写完立刻停笔。

很多考生结尾写太多：加新观点、举例、甚至道歉说“我写得不好”。这些都不加分，反而扣分。

✅ 结尾段唯一正确的写法

一句话公式：

In conclusion, + 换种说法重写开头段的第2句话

四种题型的结尾示范：

🔹 Discussion

In conclusion, I would argue that the advantages of using video security systems in public places do outweigh the disadvantages.

🔹 Opinion

In conclusion, I do not believe that any financial concessions should be made for people who choose private education.

🔹 Problem & Solution

In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.

🔹 Two-part question

In conclusion, while a variety of factors contribute to job satisfaction, it would be unrealistic to expect every worker to be happy in their job.

📌 两条铁律：

🔹 不写任何新内容
→ 不要出现新的观点、新的例子、新的数据

🔹 不换高级表达
→ 用简单的词把原意复述一遍就行，结尾不考查词汇

⚠️ 三个常见错误：

❌ In conclusion, I believe that...再加上一个前面没提过的观点
→ 考官会觉得你跑题或者没写完

❌ To sum up, the government should also...
→ “also”意味着新内容，不要加

❌ In a nutshell, sorry for my poor English...
→ 不要道歉，不要谦虚，不要画蛇添足

📌 最容易提分的信号：
写完结尾句后，你能确定这句话里没有任何新信息 → 你已经是6.5+的水平了。

🎯 下期预告：
主题词（topic vocabulary）—— 连接词不加分，那分到底加在哪？

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