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26-01-13 11:16

#好词好句#
Catherine had frightened her aunt, but she was also frightened herself; she was on the point of rushing to give orders to the servant, who was passing to the door, to admit no one; but the fear of meeting her visitor checked her.
 凯瑟琳虽然把姨妈吓住了,但她自己也心惊胆战;她正要冲过去,叫住那个正要出门的仆人,吩咐他谁也不准放进来;但一想到要面对来访的客人,她又胆怯了,停住了脚步。

这句话由三个主要部分组成,层层递进地展现了凯瑟琳的心理活动:

Catherine had frightened her aunt, but she was also frightened herself;

had frightened: 过去完成时,表示在此之前发生的动作。

frightened: 在这里作动词,意为“吓唬”、“恐吓”。

herself: 强调反身代词,意为“她自己也感到害怕”。

she was on the point of rushing to give orders to the servant... to admit no one

was on the point of: 这是一个关键短语,意为“正要……”、“即将……”,表示动作马上就要发生,但通常后面会接一个转折(如 but, however)。

rushing to: 冲过去做某事,形容急切。

give orders to: 向……下达命令。

to admit no one: 不定式作目的状语,解释命令的内容,即“不准放任何人进来”。

but the fear of meeting her visitor checked her

the fear of...: 对……的恐惧。

checked her: 这里的  check  是动词,意为“阻止”、“制止”、“使……停住”。这是整句话的转折点,说明她虽然有冲动,但最终被恐惧所压制。

On the point of doing sth: 正要做某事,即将做某事。

However / But: 但是,然而(引出转折)。

例句 1:日常生活

I was on the point of calling you to say I was running late; however, my phone battery died.
(我正要给你打电话说我要迟到了,然而我的手机没电了。)

解析:动作“打电话”即将发生,但被“没电”打断。

例句 2:职场场景

She was on the point of resigning after the argument with her boss, however, she decided to give it one more chance.
(在和老板争吵后,她正要辞职,然而她决定再给(这份工作)一次机会。)

解析:动作“辞职”即将发生,但被“改变主意”打断。

例句 3:情感描写

He was on the point of confessing his love to her; however, he lost his courage at the last second.
(他正要向她表白,然而在最后一刻他失去了勇气。)

解析:这与凯瑟琳的心理描写非常相似。

例句 4:紧急情况

They were on the point of giving up hope when however, they saw a rescue boat in the distance.
(他们正要放弃希望,然而这时他们看到了远处有一艘救援船。)

解析:动作“放弃希望”即将发生,但被“看到救援船”这一意外打断。

在写作中,使用  on the point of...  加上  however  或  but ,可以非常有效地制造悬念或突出人物内心的挣扎(就像凯瑟琳那个句子一样)。它强调了“行动”与“犹豫”之间的那一瞬间。这句话生动地描绘了凯瑟琳内心的矛盾与恐惧。

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