如何在简单句的基础上进行修饰添加,写出较为复杂的句子?在Build great sentences一书的11页最后一段话讲到:先写一个简单句,然后挖掘句子底层的propositions,再考虑word order和word choice,这样就可以让简单句华丽变身。例如:The teacher entertained his students with a humorous lecture.底层propositions 为:The teacher gave a lecture. The lecture is humorous. The teacher entertained his students. 可以升级改造为:Captivating his English majors, the professor delivered a hilarious lecture.
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